In the book of Esther without additions there is no mention of God throughout the book. Esther is queen but she does not rule, her husband is still the leader and she can persuade him but she does not make the decisions. In the additions to Esther God is mentioned several times making it seem that Esther relies on him and is looking to him for guidance and strength.
Judith openly relies on God throughout her book and asks for guidance and strength from him. She is openly religious and prays many times in the book of Judith. This is a huge difference from the original book of Esther. Judith 8:1-16:25 talks about how Judith leads as a God-fearing women and destroys the enemies of Israel (Harper, 1460).
In my opinion Judith is less dependent on men because she gets to make the choices in her life. In all of Chapter 8 of the book of Judith she talks to the town elders and tells them about the mistakes they have made. In this time it would not have been uncommon for them to ignore her or disregard her warnings. However, Judith was so respected that they listened to her earnestly and believed she was right. They took her advice and asked for her help to save the town.
This shows that Judith was not dependent on these men to lead her or for her to rely on them. They needed her help and asked her to pray for them and help them Judith 8:31.
Morgan McMullen